The Song of the Loner

Cut out from the rest, feeling so left out I lay my head on my hands and sigh: Why did things have to happen this way Why is it that I was denied? Denied the basic friendship, A meager ounce of which could help, To grow in thought, deed, word and spirit, To help strengthen myself. Why is it that I feel the need, To sit in the corner and cry? The cold creeps in and I’m overcome By the darkness and void of the night. I lift my head and open my eyes, The tears they blur my sight, And through hazed vision I notice a single star, A lone beacon in the sky. The clouds they part and a million other stars Come out from hidden slumber; They join with that single star to make The glow in the night sky brighter. Combined with the light of the great white moon, They light up the earth below. Their twinkle and their glimmer reflects on the pool, Of tears lying on the floor. Suddenly the truth hits me: My life was playing right before me! I realize that soon the time would come When I would not be lonely. That there would come a day when I wouldn’t have to weep In self pity and dismay; That the clouds of hate and bitterness Would one day roll away. That the love and friendship I duly deserve Would fall like summer rain Refreshing my soul and replenishing my spirit Making me whole again. Yet till that day I have to wait And learn to shine on my own. So for now I stand up and wipe away my tears; My spirit no longer forlorn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/9/2011 10:39:00 AM
And now you are going to love it more!!!Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Samuel. Love Carol
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Date: 12/15/2010 10:00:00 AM
thank you once again....im totally loving this site!!
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Samuel. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations Samuel on this fine win you've garnered for yourself and se readers
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:31:00 PM
Congrats Samuel, what a lovely song this is. M ay you find the friend you sincerely deserve....regards..Rinki.
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations Samuel on your worthy poems's first place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/13/2010 8:44:00 AM
Congo Samuel on win.......Luv/best wishes .... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/6/2010 1:39:00 PM
wonderful Samuel ! congrats to you on your great win
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Samuel
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:59:00 PM
good outcome, it is hard to realize we have worth separate from what we are for others or do for others, it's a tough lesson and one we can only learn after being alone long enough to find out! Light & Love
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Samuel in John Heck's contest "Blink". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:23:00 PM
thank you all so much....it feels great to win something with the first poem i posted....feel motivated to write more :) i'm really glad everyone got the message i was trying to bring out
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Date: 10/3/2010 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful 1st place winning poem! Excellent! ~ :) Carrie
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:21:00 PM
A magnificent job. Wonderful comparison to the stars. copngratulations on your first place win. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/3/2010 12:40:00 PM
Congrats on your !st place win...enjoyed
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Date: 9/25/2010 12:39:00 AM
This is a beautiful and uplifting poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:21:00 AM
It touched me .A very beautiful,heart-rendering poem Samuel yet also inspirational. At first it brought tears to my eyes then gradually by the end I found it uplifting,thank you. Love June
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Date: 9/23/2010 1:34:00 PM
Very creative and interesting thoughts on The song of the loner, samuel
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:17:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Samuel enjoyed this topic of a poem well done,..p.d.
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