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The Song of Aphrodite

I have chosen You. Sweet and handsome mortal, come to me… Whisper to me your longings, and I shall tickle your ear with my saccharine breath. I shall take you to places where only gods and goddesses roam. Aware am I of how my radiant beauty entrances you... Be thankful to the Fates that it is you I have chosen. I have sprung forth from Ocean's foam, but we shall churn that sea... Flowers at my feet would pale to the flowers that spring forth from my heart How I know too well that my eyes mesmerize A twinkle from the windows of my soul and I know I have captured you. I would gladly take off these necklaces ‘round my supple neck if it means that your lips trail soft kisses instead… I would happily unclasp these brooches in my hair, and let my flowing tresses tickle your gorgeous face and body, as I take my turn to adorn you with my kisses. I shall discard these golden robes made by the Kharites and the Horai and reveal my nubile body for you to explore with your eyes… …with your hands with your lips… Let the Seasons be forgotten, as we move to only know of Love. I have chosen You. Sweet and handsome mortal, Come to me… August 5, 2010

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Date: 9/7/2011 6:08:00 AM
Uuuu, nikko, this one is naughty. :)) My dad just nicknames our boat 'Aphrodite'. :P A lot of sensuality here. Me likes it, but I think I'm too little for this -lol. :)
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Date: 11/5/2010 11:33:00 PM
"and reveal my nubile body for you to explore with your eyes… …with your hands with your lips…" OK, if you say so! Do you have a bit of extra meat on your bottom? (just a bit extra, not too much). Because if you do, I will be your slave forever! I am obviously going to put you down as a favorite poet, but not because of your haiku; because of your free verse>>Phong
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Date: 10/30/2010 5:01:00 PM
ohhhhh la la! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2010 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win in Caties "Fanning the Embers" comp .. Love Jayne
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Date: 10/12/2010 2:22:00 AM
Incredible... absolutely stunning!
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:00:00 PM
wow, fantastic, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your second place, way to go girl! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this well derseved win in the contest, nikko
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:30:00 PM
Super congrats Nikko on your big win in Catie's contest ..way to go sweet friend with this hot piece .. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 8/23/2010 3:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Nikko, but i differ actually this deserved more than an HM, never mind! i loved your imagery n comparison here with saccharine breath n handsome mortal....n the romance is indeed a visage to a hungry mind..theres a metaphor as well which i think is hidden in the first lines....n thanks for your consideration on ccelestial....
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Date: 8/22/2010 9:22:00 AM
I'm totally with Chris on his assessment here too!! It happens like this sometimes at soup, Chris!! Sadly! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:22:00 AM
Nikko, congratulations on your win in Amy Green's contest"Godesses of Glory For Women Only". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:52:00 PM
Oh nikko...I'm salivating with the poem's beauty...my gosh,,,I totally love mythology....and you just capture my heart...I love the flow and the mood in which the poem is carried...wow...I'm speechless...allow me to print this one..add this to my favs....^_^ v
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:30:00 PM
nikko nikko picco picco! sorry couldn't help myself :p congrats on your poem! love the mytholigical goddesses n.n
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Date: 8/9/2010 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful, enchanting, spell-binding. Congratulations on your HM Nikko, there must have been some stiff competition, because this reads like a winner to me ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:47:00 AM
Alas, dear Aphrodite, the Gorgon Medusa has turned me to stone and I am about to be cast into the River Styx, there to sink forever. This Greek stuff I dearly love. Have written a chap book on the mythology. Dave
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Date: 8/7/2010 11:11:00 PM
Hehe, see the worry in my fickle eyes?? Hey seeing that I'm here congrats on your HM sleeping beauty :)
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:26:00 PM
wow, NIkko. I had somehow missed this one. It is really good. Very clever how you captured her essence. Congrats on the HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:12:00 PM
congrats on your win in this challenging contest
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:07:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your winning poem in Amy's part of the contest .. with this excellent write on your goddess.. a special honor to enjoy today.. sweets..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:54:00 PM
How could one resist???? Wow....this will have him panting!!!! (whew!) A winner!! :) (ps...thanks so much for my placement in your last contest...Nikko....you have great contest ideas....and now it's all about Moles?? Who would have thought?? Ha ha!!)
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Date: 8/6/2010 1:13:00 PM
this is a pretty poem. great job Nikko, & this handsome mortal must be a very fine one.(: lol.& thanks for the comments,funny. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:19:00 PM
wow! Nikko, your entry is awesome. I read one or two others, but i love this one... Cool goddesses,..the best of luck in the contest...have a fun one,..p.d.
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