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The Snowy Mountains Tanka Contest

the snowy mountains
are silent and without life
a yeti appears
i wonder if i am just
imagining company

for Susan’s tanka contest

adventuretanka

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/20/2012 4:23:00 PM

Awesome and nice piece,Jack....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations Jack, watch out for them yetis they squeeze hard xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 8:42:00 PM

Jack :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2012 4:01:00 PM

so far, seeing the winners, i can understand exactly how susan was judging them. I really agree with her placements and yours was so cool, jack. I am such a moron, I forgot to even enter my tanka into the contest. I wonder if she would have liked it very much. Luv, andrea

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/13/2012 9:57:00 AM

probably.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2012 8:03:00 PM

Jack, knowing Susan's sense of humor, I think this is a WINNER. I really like it!! and I think you are busy for getting ready for Xmas. I have just been doing cards, packages and little else. I think after this week, it's gonna be smooth sailing after that!! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2012 12:58:00 PM

I hope just imagination..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/9/2012 12:58:00 PM

Ha ha ha, a Yeti? Seriously this is too funny my friend! I really do enjoy reading this incredibly hilarious poem this afternoon! What a perfect entry into Susan's contest Jack! You will do very well! Great Work!!