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The Snooping Walls

The snooping walls are watching me
And now they know my secret kink.
I feel their eyes upon my back
And wonder what the hell they think.

I fear they’ll tell the world about
The prostitute I sawed in half.
I trust the doors and windows, though,
As when I killed, I heard them laugh…

For Susan’s If these walls could talk contest

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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 7:46:00 PM
    Wow, Jack! An excellent and quite disturbing write. Don't worry your secrets safe...LOL! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:20:00 AM
    This was so good, but so bad! Loved it Jack. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:18:00 AM
    Congrats on a great win in Susan's contest with your wonderful entry!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Congrats on your write, well done. Sounds a bit like a broadway show, Todd Sweeney I think its called. Lee

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 12:03:00 PM
    Congrats Jack on this great and sinister write! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your imaginative poem winning. teriific job.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:12:00 AM
    "Wow Jack. I had no idea! Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:54:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:43:00 AM
    super nice write Jack..i like it..congrats on your win!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 9:05:00 PM
    I just knew she would love this. Susan has a great dark humor herself. Big congrats. It was deliciously morbid.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 7:40:00 PM
    wow!! great write my friend! Congratulations on your big win!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 5:30:00 PM
    I hope they talk on you a funny one, but don't we wish walls could talk, so they perps could be caught more often and faster? great write and big congrats on a super win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 3:20:00 PM
    You wrote this as tho u were a serial killer, eh?...Great concept and u blew the roof off the top with it!! Just leave it to Jack to write something grand!! Congrats, gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 12:06:00 PM
    eerie yet beautifully crafted, jack.... sweet congrats and huggs!.:)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:25:00 AM
    A great poem here jack!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:27:00 AM
    Congratulation on your #1 win Jack! Loved the dark humor in this one :)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:24:00 AM
    Hola, Jack , congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD