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The Smell of Home

We’d come back from the airport And as she walked through the door, she inhaled deeply Then she took a few breaths more With a sparkle in her eye, she turned around and smiled “Oh, Mama…this is what we smell like!” I looked at her in confusion Daddy didn’t know what to say She just twirled around and said, “This is the smell of home.” For Skat's Home Sweet Home Contest A reworked older write to fit under ten lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/26/2015 1:26:00 PM
Very descriptive work about the scent of home..I enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2015 1:20:00 AM
Hello Jade, Nice win...... LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/24/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Linda. Sure appreciate it! :)
Date: 5/20/2015 7:04:00 PM
Hi Jade, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/24/2015 9:05:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely placement, Skat. I sure appreciate it. :) Hugs
Date: 3/30/2013 11:23:00 PM
Awww, this is very sweet. Love it! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:23:00 PM
i know exactly what she meant and you've described it beautifully here!
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:16:00 PM
No place like it...some things you can always depend on....that make you feel safe...I still refer to my parents house as home...lovely Eileen
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Date: 3/29/2013 10:30:00 AM
home sweet home, you do this so well Eileen,, lovely poetry...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/29/2013 11:08:00 AM
Harry, you are so sweet to comment. I always like hearing from you. Hugs!
Date: 3/29/2013 7:29:00 AM
First line your tense is off try We came back from the airport. Also get rid of and in line two. Very sweet poem, I can relate to the smell of home. My sweetie is an amazing cook and I love the smells that permeate our home. Turkey dinner today!
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:04:00 AM
Beautifully done Eileen...Children seem to notice and appreciate the little things that we adults don't...Great write! - Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/29/2013 6:51:00 AM
My daughter is here for five days. I'm thrilled. She is studying abroad. Thanks for the lovely comment, Tim. Sweet of you!
Date: 3/29/2013 5:22:00 AM
- Be away are good ..... but home is best! - Home Sweet Home! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/29/2013 6:54:00 AM
Yes, my dear. You know what she said???? "You and Daddy are my best friends." Thanks for the lively comment. Hugs!
Date: 3/29/2013 5:09:00 AM
That's the best feeling!!! Enjoyed reading as always.. :)
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