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The Smell of Home

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The Smell of Home

We’d come back from the airport
And as she walked through the door, she inhaled deeply
Then she took a few breaths more
With a sparkle in her eye, she turned around and smiled
“Oh, Mama…this is what we smell like!”

I looked at her in confusion
Daddy didn’t know what to say
She just twirled around and said, 
“This is the smell of home.”

For Skat's Home Sweet Home Contest
A reworked older write to fit under ten lines

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  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:23:00 PM
    Awww, this is very sweet. Love it! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:23:00 PM
    i know exactly what she meant and you've described it beautifully here!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:16:00 PM
    No place like it...some things you can always depend on....that make you feel safe...I still refer to my parents house as home...lovely Eileen

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 10:30:00 AM
    home sweet home, you do this so well Eileen,, lovely poetry...

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 3/29/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Harry, you are so sweet to comment. I always like hearing from you. Hugs!
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 7:29:00 AM
    First line your tense is off try We came back from the airport. Also get rid of and in line two. Very sweet poem, I can relate to the smell of home. My sweetie is an amazing cook and I love the smells that permeate our home. Turkey dinner today!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 6:04:00 AM
    Beautifully done Eileen...Children seem to notice and appreciate the little things that we adults don't...Great write! - Tim

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 3/29/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My daughter is here for five days. I'm thrilled. She is studying abroad. Thanks for the lovely comment, Tim. Sweet of you!
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:22:00 AM
    - Be away are good ..... but home is best! - Home Sweet Home! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 3/29/2013 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, my dear. You know what she said???? "You and Daddy are my best friends." Thanks for the lively comment. Hugs!
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:09:00 AM
    That's the best feeling!!! Enjoyed reading as always.. :)