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The shower curtain

The flower’s image before me

So overwhelmed by the splendor,
my fingers become;
and what spills
sears mine slip;

stunning sky blue decorate
the sylphs eyes,
clustered blond tresses ornament
her soft Caucasian flesh 
to her hips
leading this soul’s gaze  to those,
naked distended lips

The poet pining for this;
petite nubile miss

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  1. Date: 11/22/2011 5:44:00 AM
    youthfull or soulless is this sylph?

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 7:52:00 PM
    Don't know which is more fun, your verse or Daver's pacemaker. Either way, I enjoyed both.

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 12:22:00 PM
    This is such a cute poem, James! Very well done. Enjoyed. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Keep your eye on the shower curtain flower. The one within is mere whimsy. Be still my old heart - pace maker going wild. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 10:50:00 AM
    All that is left to say is, ooh la la~ very sensual write, James!

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 10:23:00 AM
    A most fantastic piece James. Images I see lure me into your poem to witness what you have seen. A most beautiful read this fine Sunday :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 11:47:00 AM
    Sensual and yet so delicate, this made me smile James, luckily it is almost 9pm over here ;) enjoy your weekend, love Wilma

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 7:27:00 AM
    I should have read this one Sat. evening rather than Sat. morning cause now my mind is going bonkers with visual passion James.. u are the master of this technique luv.. enticing the reader and building the suspense... will be mesmerized and haunted all weekend with these charming lines.. enjoy blessings...luv..

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 12:59:00 AM
    And now you are at the shower curtain. Boy, James, you just love seeing those nude women in every place imaginable! Your poetry fits the lyrics of that song that says, "my sweet little imagination!"

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 10:36:00 PM
    olala, very sexy piece indeed! with beautiful words in between. can't say which one is more tempting, the miss or the poet here ;D LoL! thanks for stopping by. best wishes always

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 8:46:00 PM
    Hi James~this is some kind of hot write...what a scene in this shower...hope your mother is not also a ps member!! ha ha, great write. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 4:03:00 PM
    this is a sensual, subtly erotic write, I like :-) don't think I've read any of your work before, but I shall read more...

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 1:02:00 PM
    Wonderfully romantic, James! I can just imagine you pining for the "petite nubile miss" behind the shower curtain. I think this is one of your best poems and it's going to my favorites. I did find an old address for you and hope you haven't moved. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 12:03:00 PM
    Its a chilly day here in good ole NY but your words jus kicked up the temp!!! always Michael