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The Shining

It shines on me with the warmest beams as it sets a light over all of earth and it sits beside everything unseen spilling above everything that's worth touching all that's been left untouched it'll fill this planet until it's done there's nothing that I've loved as much as that firing, orange ball of sun It's superior to the coldness as each side of earth waits it's turn It's dangerous to us too if we go about it wrong but it's helpful and is our source as it sits to burn and it's here for as long as we need it and more until it grows less strong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/19/2012 8:05:00 PM
What a fun poem!My favorite line is "there's nothing that I've loved as much as that firing, orange ball of sun. Thanks for the great comments on my poem! Is there a way to add someone as a friend on this site?
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Date: 5/17/2012 10:45:00 AM
very nice :)
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Date: 5/17/2012 10:44:00 AM
very nice :)
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