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the shining

It shines on me with the warmest beams
as it sets a light over all of earth 
and it sits beside everything unseen 
spilling above everything that's worth 

touching all that's been left untouched 
it'll fill this planet until it's done 
there's nothing that I've loved as much as that firing, orange ball of sun 

It's superior to the coldness as each side of earth waits it's turn 
It's dangerous to us too if we go about it wrong
but it's helpful and is our source as it sits to burn 
and it's here for as long as we need it and more until it grows less strong

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  1. Date: 5/19/2012 8:05:00 PM
    What a fun poem!My favorite line is "there's nothing that I've loved as much as that firing, orange ball of sun. Thanks for the great comments on my poem! Is there a way to add someone as a friend on this site?

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 10:45:00 AM
    very nice :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 10:44:00 AM
    very nice :)