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The Seven Deadly Sins Revisited

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The Seven Deadly Sins Revisited

Do not be angry with your fellow friend
It tears you apart
And, it puts stress on your heart

No need to own more than you already have
Resolve your passion for those in need
Step up and be the one to lead

The Truth of the Word is written
Take heed so you will not it take lightly
For the Words are not meant slightly

God gave us two meanings
We can choose to be more than we should
Or make better choices to not be misunderstood

A powerful emotion this is, takes control
Thoughts in the mind are intense and disrupting
Prayer to the Higher Power will be the only way to interrupting

Submit not to it
No concern of others’ wealth, you have what you need
With that, you will succeed

Waste not your food, drink, or belongings
Those who have nothing, distribute your supply
Chances are you will get by.

©Holly P. Moore
   November 2012

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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:29:00 PM
    I had to come back to Fav this poem.It speaks volumes.. :o)

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Very nice! :o) Everyone in the world needs to know what the seven deadly sins are.The world could be a much better place if they all did..

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 5:32:00 AM
    Wonderful ! You are really letting your talent shine!!!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 8:04:00 PM
    Dear Holly, you pointed out the 7 deadly sins, in a very unique way . Love the nodded fashion you used to present your form. , I like what you did with the didactic. Every one of the sins are pin pointed right. I think the greed one can teach a small lesson as well. I see the 2 prides you are talking about. The rhymes are well fitted in your poem. Thank you for always taking your time, and reading my poems.. your the best.. always~ pd

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:12:00 AM
    A very unique poem Holly, I like this very much. - All 7 are providing a good opinion. - In my last poem I lit some candles for you ... lol ... - I wish you a nice day. - oxox (always your friend) / / Anne-Lise :)