The Seperation

I came here to co-create
Yet what I did was judge and hate
I labeled things as good and bad
Some made me happy others made me sad
This is where the separation began
Never realizing it was at my own hand
At one point I decided I was here all alone
For God’s love and grace in this world were unknown
Suddenly I fell my knees hit the floor
I yelled GOD please come and take me I can’t do this anymore
A Healing took place through God’s Love and Grace
Revealing to me a world to embrace
I asked,” Lord how can this be, that I could not see
Everything here beholds God’s Beauty?”
His world you see, is a mystery
You cannot find it without being set free
Now I begin with forgiveness within
Trying not to separate through judgment again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/19/2012 9:54:00 AM
All these poems made me very HAPPY I LOVE YOU!!
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Date: 5/3/2012 8:58:00 AM
i really enjoyed this poem :)
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Date: 5/3/2012 3:21:00 AM
wow...amazing...i enjoyed your poem...(<")
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today and congrats on feature...Patrick
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Date: 5/1/2012 5:57:00 AM
A sad yet so profound poem. the end of the poem is so positive. harry
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:46:00 AM
Beautifully written from the heart Lisa...I loved it..Congratulations on your poem being featured!!...Love Diana
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Date: 4/12/2012 7:07:00 AM
Well written Lisa.....like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/11/2012 10:06:00 PM
A valuable lesson to learn. Nice poem Lisa
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