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The Sentinel

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The Sentinel

On the front line stands a man 
to give last breath

He walks in death’s dark shadow
the sentinel

a keen watchman
fulfills solemn oath
who watches out for him?

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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:20:00 AM
    love this clever and deep write, my friend

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Having served my country, this poem hits home for me. For I have definitely walked in death's shadow. Not that an answer to the question is needed, but from my perspective, the sentries look out for each other, creating a bond that last a lifetime. Brothers. This is a great poem, I love it. Doug

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:56:00 AM
    This is a great write. Thanks for sharin g and for reading my poem. many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 4:42:00 PM
    nice write Annalise...enjoyed

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 2:38:00 PM
    I love your question at the end there, Annalise. VERY thought provoking!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:00:00 AM
    ... and who watches the WATCHER'S watcher? It's a deadly cycle methinks... always someone is left unguarded. Very cool questionku... someday I will write one myself! And thanks for reading several of my poems yesterday... 'twas a delight to read them :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:53:00 AM
    Where have you be'd dear Annalise... I have missed you! All's forgiven though after reading this sad, poignant essay! Love ya! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 5:24:00 AM
    - A bit sad, but well written Annalise! - Have a nice Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:29:00 AM
    Very good Questionku by you Annalise.Love it.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:42:00 PM
    Wow, a very powerful write, sadness is written in the lines! Your Questionku is phenomenal! You have written a beautiful poem! What an enlightening piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:32:00 PM
    how very sad and heartfelt Annalise.. I enjoyed it...Love,Deb