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The Seaside Lullaby Sonnet Kyrielle

Your daddy's boat is on its way. The lighthouse sends a gleaming ray that blinks and whirls in starry sky. For you, sweet babe, this lullaby. You soon shall be on Daddy's knee, for though tonight he rides the sea, he follows gulls that homeward fly. I sing the seaside lullaby. The beacon's beam is light that guides; it's steadfast as the ocean's tides. So close your eyes, for sleep is nigh. For you, sweet babe, this lullaby. Your daddy's boat is on its way. I sing the seaside lullaby. For Catie LIndsay's "Sing A Lull-a-bye" Contest

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Date: 4/21/2010 6:17:00 PM
This sounds like an old lullaby I remember from a book I had as a child....it has that sweet storybook feel to it...love it!! Congratulations Andrea..on your win!!
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:05:00 PM
U received 5th place with another poet.. luv.. only on for about 15 minutes then Ron and I are going to ....... never mind....luv..
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Date: 4/21/2010 11:40:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win in the lullaby contest.. a great write and win for your poetry portfolio ...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:53:00 AM
I love your lullaby...good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:02:00 PM
Awesome write here, Andrea and a winner for sure!! Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:22:00 AM
Easter greetings Andrea thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian.Best wishes in this contest.
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:35:00 PM
Yes I am still fixing mine in between time.
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Date: 3/31/2010 3:46:00 PM
Reassurance and sweetness wrapped up all in one warm blanket- I think the women have an upper hand in this lullaby contest lol
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:28:00 AM
Lovely lullaby for the contest, Andrea! And good luck! Thank you for your welcome comments and have a great Easter! Love, Gert
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:28:00 AM
What a beautiful Lullaby Andrea, I can feel the boat coming in and the childs eyes closing to a promise ! Nice one ! P.S. Now how could I devulge the daffodils likeness without sharing ? *smiles* james
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:32:00 AM
Great lyrics that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:20:00 AM
Very cute Andrea.. good luck in the neat contest by Catie.. I felt like singing along all the way through... alert..alert..alert.. Constance has a new contest posted.. u need to soup mail her to get a number and a topic... 12 spots still open at last check..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/28/2010 12:21:00 AM
Beautfiul so beautiful dear friend..Charma
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Date: 3/27/2010 10:23:00 PM
Do you know the old English song.' Dance to your daddy my bonnie laddie, dance to your daddy my bonny lamb.You shall have a fishy on a little dishy you shall have a haddock when the boat comes in" This came back to me when reading your lullaby. looks a winner Andrea....luv Margaret
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:20:00 PM
Very cute . I like it the read. I read Lindas. Its cute also I have one, but it is with humor..Enjoyed....IRMA
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Date: 3/27/2010 4:22:00 PM
makes me think of a newborn, and their mother or father trying to put them asleep, i find it to be cute, even though it can be a hassel at times, im sure the words of your poem would be an easy way. great poem, good luck to you.i've decided to write without the nasty.lol.i really don't know what that witch is, im figuring it out now though.my weekend is fine, i get a week off.so i'll have much fun looking forward to(: i hope your weekend is an easy one like your write.-Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/27/2010 3:03:00 PM
This could put me to sleep and at ease. This is sweet, nice, and a treat. My best goes to you on the contest.
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