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The Sands of My Heart

If I built you a castle out of sand Would you know each grain is a piece of my heart It will never crumble, or fall apart Created by love, forever it will stand. The winds of time will never blow it down Protected by my soul, you are safe inside Even the tides of life shall be denied True love braves the wind, and storms all around. Will you come live in this castle I’ve built? Surround yourself in the walls of my soul Each speck of my heart wants to make you whole Step inside my life, without fear or guilt. This castle is nothing without you dear Its walls cannot stand and will disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 10:25:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:18:00 PM
this is a lovely romantic piece, and thank you so much for your comments on my work
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:11:00 PM
THIS IS ADORING IN SO MANY WAYS,, LOVE
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:04:00 PM
A nice Italian sonnet. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:54:00 PM
did you just write this ,because it is awesome, it has a nice flow, as if you had no problems writing it,..p.d.
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