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The Same Song

always the same song incessantly his gums flapped.. cotton in the ears hungary buzzards on a still morning look the same flapping their wings

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/25/2013 8:15:00 AM

Interesting one. Loved always, bl

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 7/24/2013 9:51:00 AM

great one.(:cJenish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 11:34:00 PM

Well, since i don't like buzzards, I am glad they are hungry... Sara, hope the cotton helps with the annoying flaps... love the senryu... LINDA

The Situation

Date: 7/23/2013 2:24:00 PM

thats a nasty way of putting it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2013 7:49:00 AM

I enjoyed reading these this morning, Sara. The first one made me wonder what or who it was.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 7/23/2013 7:48:00 AM

Exceptional Senryu-- love the comparatives and your cleverly woven metaphors. x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/23/2013 7:41:00 AM

you mystify me with your images, sara... an incessant feel of sounds grates this senryu.. marvelous!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/23/2013 7:33:00 AM

Sara, as always write tenderly and beautiful. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/23/2013 6:49:00 AM

This is good Sara. The buzzards are always waiting. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/23/2013 6:25:00 AM

I loved this write my friend, you do like to write about those buzzards don't you? Those old buzzards that are fascinating, which brought about some great poetry! I really enjoyed reading this superior poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!