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The Same Boat We Rented Before

Down from the statue and into the water they will come for you Out from the safety and into the womb they will comfort you The scanning of retinas stops now though it’s not like I got complaints It’s just the landlords of autumn have disclosed a lot and they have tainted the sacred grace For climax add some fabric calamity and you got yourself a being To detract anyone add to the archetype of slings and arrows only then will you be “seeing” Rocks fall humans crawl Primordial urges power surges Planets shift but trends stick Drip dry those subliminal thoughts they’re projecting more then you think Sort me out Anyone could sort me out we’re all the same The scanning of retinas will never stop The energy rattles the earth off it’s hinges and the dirt from the grave But I promise you it will never stop until none of us are the same

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/19/2010 8:18:00 AM
Martin, thank you for your comment. I try to keep things as simple as possible. Your poetry is about life. And yes, trends do stick. You have captured for me the strangeness of the life cycle. I will think about your images for some time.
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