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the sadness in my heart

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the sadness in my heart

"Such was the lives"
 when we sat together holding hands 
and sharing "ice cream kisses"
I loved him and "his drunken kiss"
 that only led to his "confession"
a life of lies and betrayal
Now I sit alone 
watching the "sunset" with "regret "
recoperating from a "meltdown"
after my nerves became "tangeled vines"
and my body "my broken column"

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Karen, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:42:00 PM
    great win......... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Wonderful write, congratulations Karen....Peter

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Congratulations Karen..very nice...

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:05:00 PM
    really enjoyed this one...congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:47:00 PM
    This is good, Karen. and I see you used Broken column. I am guessing you have entered the frida contest? Way to go in this contest. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Congratulations Karen, xox..Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 2:54:00 PM
    It is sad when we find out the person is not who we thought they were. Congratulating on your win.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Congratulations, Karen. Your entry and placement are well deserved.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Karen, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 12:46:00 PM
    - Soooo.... sad poem Karen, well written! - Hope your weekend has been great! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)