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The Sadness In My Heart

"Such was the lives" when we sat together holding hands and sharing "ice cream kisses" I loved him and "his drunken kiss" that only led to his "confession" a life of lies and betrayal Now I sit alone watching the "sunset" with "regret " recoperating from a "meltdown" after my nerves became "tangeled vines" and my body "my broken column"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/10/2013 5:17:00 PM
Karen, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:42:00 PM
great win......... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations Karen..very nice...
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:05:00 PM
really enjoyed this one...congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:47:00 PM
This is good, Karen. and I see you used Broken column. I am guessing you have entered the frida contest? Way to go in this contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/5/2013 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations Karen, xox..Linda
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:54:00 PM
It is sad when we find out the person is not who we thought they were. Congratulating on your win.
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Date: 9/5/2013 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Karen. Your entry and placement are well deserved.... Jake
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Date: 9/5/2013 7:26:00 AM
Karen, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/18/2013 12:46:00 PM
- Soooo.... sad poem Karen, well written! - Hope your weekend has been great! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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