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The roses ain't red

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The roses ain't red

I'm no dead
So I could

Fly to the moon
Singing some funny tune
With White ribbon in my head
And broad smile on my face
Hanging on a shoelace
Drowning in shiny lagoon

I could...
But I can't
- Why?

The roses ain't red!

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  1. Date: 7/26/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Lakasz. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 3:36:00 AM
    Lukasz super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:12:00 AM
    LOL sounds like the start of a good childrens book..I think you want [I'm not dead/so I could/fly to the moon/singing some funny tune/with white ribbons on my head/ and a broad smile on my face/while hanging on a shoelace/or drown in a shiny lagoon./I could/but I can't/why?] the last line and the title ..I have NO clue..hmmm unless this is an Alice reference to the Red Queen the Rose Queen and OFF with their heads??? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 5:02:00 PM
    Wow..what a nice poem here! Congradulations on your well deserved win! Hope to see you around more...please let me know when you have some new work I would love to check it out! Jane XoXo

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 9:49:00 AM
    congrats on an HM win for this fantastic entry and creative composition luv..

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Hi Lukasz this poem certainly flies straight from you pen lovely mfriend, all the best Owen