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The Room Revisited

THE ROOM REVISITED Eye of the cobweb In my self-imposed room I’m thinking Thinking there is a world out there – To the perimeters and All between – A world of living creatures Creatures whose complete concern is Survival In my comfy room Eye of the cobweb I fancy them Cute Or beautiful Or ugly Furry Slimy Whatever They are alive! All, essentially, the same Whose complete concern is Survival All competitors All predators Eye of the cobweb In my room revisited I’m thinking In reality There is no “thing” about them Cute Beautiful Ugly Furry Or slimy They are alive! All brothers Caught up in this spinning, cruel world together Eye of the cobweb In my room revisited I’m shedding tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/30/2013 9:31:00 AM
Enjoyed this one..Did you remove the spider web then regret doing that or it this metaphoric language?..Thanks for the visit to my page..My soup is moving so slowly that it is slower than grandma...Ha!! Sara
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:54:00 AM
Daver, glad you enjoyed my seasons dance. Soup is SO slow this morning. Is it that way sometimes with you?? I sure hope this is a temporary thing because I need to leave the house and cannot get to my comments quickly enough today. Have a great day, my friend. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:38:00 PM
aha, I see y ou have posted it here. A really GREAT new poem from you, Daver. One of your best.
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:26:00 PM
Love your thoughts here, Daver....compassionate...beautiful! jimbo
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:02:00 AM
A very sad and touching poem Daver.... found the poem kind of loving then sad... when reminiscing.. always a fan ..LINDA
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