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The River

Stepping on the rocks While the river goes by me What a peaceful day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Justin Hensley
Date: 5/19/2009 2:12:00 PM
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I really like this Haiku reminds me of the how i love the sound of river flwoing near me!
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 3/12/2009 5:52:00 PM
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Dear Elizabeth, I join YOU in YOUR LOVE of NATURE, Blessings to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Abe Lopez
Date: 2/19/2009 2:09:00 PM
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this reminds me of the many streams and creeks i have fished .......nice imagery
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Robin L. Gass
Date: 2/15/2009 6:05:00 PM
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Great imagery in this, Elizabeth! Lovely Haiku! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/13/2009 4:30:00 PM
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This one has me smiling. I feel at peace by the water so can really relate to your words. Nice use of this short form. Enjoyed it. Karen
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Michael Jordan
Date: 2/12/2009 4:54:00 PM
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Elizabeth this is a wonderful haiku - I can see you hopping from rock to rock - God Bless, MJ
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Jim Wilson
Date: 2/12/2009 4:32:00 PM
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This is soothing. Thanks.
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