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The Ring

A wary young man said, "I suppose, 
that this lady to whom I propose; 
a ring on her finger 
delight it will bring her.  
So, why does she want one in my nose?

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  1. Date: 11/6/2011 7:06:00 AM
    Enjoyed the humor...I sure that she will not want that ring in your nose..Thanks for stopping by..I looked up Shakespeare's Sonnet #12 since I had never read it before.Yes, some of my wording did resemble the poem and yes, one could read into my work a very deep meaning..Thanks for taking the time to see that.Sara

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 2:32:00 AM
    This is cooooool. So you are the one!! ha ha. Read my poem Fingering a Humdinger! Right up your alley. Great Jolopies, Batman...I think u are on a roll!

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 6:51:00 PM
    Because when it snows she blows her nose, what other reason could there be luv. You are too much!

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 12:44:00 PM
    there is nothing attractive about a guy with a nose ring lol. Nessa