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Below is the poem entitled THE REVELATION OF ME which was written by poet Kib G. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Frustration builds......
Awaiting my personal adaptation to life, 
which has yet to be revealed.....
I stare into the mirror in search of all that is concealed..The reflection speaks to me saying if u can see me I
must be real...Then my mind interrupts and repeats, " Your truth has still yet to be revealed....
Things aren't always what is seen but sometimes is what u feel.....
Holding back one's true self from the reality of life,which is often cold and chilled...
But the realization!!! "of the lack of" life's adaptation!!!! Is what forces u deeper into yourself in search of "a 
personal revelation"...
Opens your eyes to see..... 
Life is what u make it, and it's "waiting for you  to demonstrate through your everyday,exactly "what you need it to be".......
So adapting to life is the same as adapting to me...
And now that I'm revealed,Clearity is found, frustration is released in I'm FEELING FREE......

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  1. Date: 1/28/2011 12:19:00 PM
    probably something we all go through, especially if we have a mental illness of some kind; great poem :)

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 5:31:00 PM
    Every day of life is a new adventure Kibi.. a brilliant synopsis in words .. reads like prose poetry or a slight Free Verse form .. enjoyed so much with luv..

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 12:22:00 PM
    Cute narrative on the revelation of one's self, kibi

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 9:04:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kibi. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol