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The Reformatrory

The Reformatory Cottage needs a lick of paint but the old man isn´t bothered let flakes of paint blow away layers by layers as calendar years. Let wind and rain strip cement off walls till the old stones appears a skeleton ancient as the land. The old man has bought new shoes but they do not give springs in his steps, and feet ask for the trust carpet slippers for he will not go out in the rain get his face wet in youthful jubilation Old age has made his home into a maximum security prison; there is no escape.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/11/2013 7:58:00 AM
Dear Jan - I am so touched by this. I know a building by the beach which was once a residence for the blind and long ago boarded up. I never thought of it as an old man stripped of his purpose, his robustness. Sadder and sadder as I grow to be almost your age (gentle dig) Sneakered, I trip on carpets every day.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/11/2013 11:54:00 AM
but katy I´m only sixty but pretend to be older

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