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The Reflection

There is a glass across the sea, that reflects the life of me. Every time I look into that glass, I can see you there with me. The reflection is so real - that even though the years have passed, I still see you next to me. The love that we once shared - that glass holds it there. The glass will always reflect the life you lived with me. When the sun goes down at night, the reflection goes away, but come the morning light, I still see you by my side...
10/272012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo for The Reflection contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/24/2013 12:06:00 PM
beautiful Work is displayed here. Your mastery of phrasing is well exhibited here..... I'm enjoying your postings..... Jake
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Date: 1/7/2013 10:16:00 PM
Very, very nice..
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Date: 11/3/2012 11:34:00 AM
Two thumbs up for this beautiful poem you creatively write for the theme Lucilla! Sun always shines in our life giving the best reflection. This is a winner for me. Have a grace-filled day always! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/31/2012 7:09:00 AM
Excellent write. Well penned. Tfs
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Date: 10/30/2012 9:24:00 PM
I really love how you penned this piece of art of yours..good luck on the contest.. :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:57:00 AM
Reflection in the sunshine ...... everything is brighter and easier in the sunshine. - A lovely poem that will reach high in the contest Lucilla. -Good Luck !!! - oxox always / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:20:00 AM
I REALLY LIKED IT, BUT THE STORY WAS A BIT TRAGIC . BUT THEN THE BEST STORIES ARE SAD ONES. THE WRITE WAS TRULLY AMAIZING LUCILLA *SMILES* RoN
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Date: 10/28/2012 12:57:00 PM
‡ Beauty In Love. You Brush It Red Carmine Hues, Beautifully Sweet Beautiful Lucilla. Thank You For Your Kind Most Appreciated And Lovely Visit. Have A Very Beautiful Day. My Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/28/2012 9:57:00 AM
I love the way you have written this, good luck for the contest...
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Date: 10/28/2012 8:32:00 AM
Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..I really enjoyed reading this creative work this morn..Sara
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Date: 10/28/2012 1:52:00 AM
lovely poem
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Date: 10/27/2012 8:59:00 PM
Lucy, this is a wonderful poem.... i wrote a reflection poem tooo.... the see reflect most gracious of your soul....good luck in the contest.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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Date: 10/27/2012 10:24:00 AM
Nicely done for the contest. I really like your entry. Yes, it has snowed here already. YUK
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