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The Red Sun

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The Red Sun

She Rose Up, He went Down 

seen through the heat haze of  morn
the sun rises, blushing pink 
to peach, then rose cheeked

a lustful sun burns the sky
to periwinkle blue
oh the after glow

Date: 6/28/13
* Love poetry was written in this form.
Contest: The Red Sun 

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:33:00 PM
    .... congrats *****SKAT ....

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:06:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:14:00 PM
    You painted a very well imaged scene...the intimacy and the after glow. Well done. Congratulations on your win:)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:41:00 AM
    You have captured the day in all stages. Well described sun phases. Should place well if you have entered this one. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Excellent beauty is adorned to depict the secret picture of Red Sun's changing colors. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:30:00 PM
    Beautiful poem here Debbie!Lovely read.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery. Love all the colors in it.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Love that afterglow!!! Your choice of words is amazing, Debbie. Love the theme of sun. Very colorful write. Pun intended. :-)

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 6/28/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yup I'm very punny!