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The Red Sun

She Rose Up, He went Down seen through the heat haze of morn the sun rises, blushing pink to peach, then rose cheeked a lustful sun burns the sky to periwinkle blue oh the after glow Date: 6/28/13 * Love poetry was written in this form. Contest: The Red Sun

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Date: 7/25/2013 2:33:00 PM
.... congrats *****SKAT ....
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:06:00 PM
Congrats.
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:14:00 PM
You painted a very well imaged scene...the intimacy and the after glow. Well done. Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 7/23/2013 12:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/4/2013 10:41:00 AM
You have captured the day in all stages. Well described sun phases. Should place well if you have entered this one. SuZ
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:45:00 AM
Excellent beauty is adorned to depict the secret picture of Red Sun's changing colors. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/29/2013 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem here Debbie!Lovely read.
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:51:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Love all the colors in it.
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:50:00 AM
Love that afterglow!!! Your choice of words is amazing, Debbie. Love the theme of sun. Very colorful write. Pun intended. :-)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/28/2013 11:17:00 AM
yup I'm very punny!

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