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The reality of a walk in the woods

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The reality of a walk in the woods

The beckoning still of a pool of 
blue flowers
(Her eyes, they lure and I drift)

Sunlight  filters above
(Her hair, soft, slips through 
my fingers)

The caress of a whispering  
(Her voice, provocative)

The subtle turbulence of flora 
(Her scent, sensual... come 

Droplets gather and fall
(Her tears, she is vulnerable)

I want to take her hand
(I can’t)

We walk in the woods
( It is nothing more)

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:46:00 PM
    I do love this ! Thanks ~

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:38:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Hello Paul, well done with the deep imagery. Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:58:00 AM
    This is beautiful.

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    Date: 8/13/2013 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Karissa x
  1. Date: 11/2/2010 4:40:00 PM
    very cool writing, you have here.. keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 7:41:00 PM
    Hi paul.This is lovely.I like the images you have used and the subtlety of emotion you convey.It is soft and gentle and almost has a sadness to it, to desire something and know it is out of reach.Forbidden unrequited,who can say?you leave it to us the reader to form our own opinion therefore giving it an air of mystery. Loved it very much.And thankyou for kind comments on my own piece. Love June

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 12:22:00 PM
    Lots of great imagery Paul with vivid anticipation of things to come... enjoyed your creativity today..with luv..

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 6:51:00 AM
    A very creative write and nice thoughts, Paul

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 6:08:00 PM
    I enjoyed this...lots of feeling Take care`Deb

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 3:30:00 PM
    Interesting write shared... lots of feelings