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~The Real Me~ When I close my eyes, I see you walking through my mind Turning every corner, wondering what you will find… You take a twist and dive on in Not knowing if you are yang to my yin You dodge around what you don’t like And search for something that seems alright Each twist and turn you follow through As each door closes, you open a new You are searching for the real me I wonder if you will ever see The person that my words reveal Like the onion with many layers to peel May not be what you are searching for But don’t close your mind like any door Keep on searching and you never know My grey matter that’s like grey dough May one day surprise you well But this is not where you need to dwell. You lift me up when I feel down My words some think are from a clown The real me is in there somewhere And this will be my little prayer That the real me you will one day find And then introduce me to my mind ………. ©23/10/2012~GG~

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:47:00 PM
    intense, beautiful...

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:21:00 AM
    WOW! What a poem. It is beautiful. It is a shame that sometimes people can't see the real person in us. have a great weekend. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:56:00 AM
    What! This is lovely Mandy.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:50:00 PM
    Such an amazing piece!! I've missed your poetry lately. Bad Michael. Luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:10:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Mandy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Wonderfully penned this verse and enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Captivating verse Mandy, you are the enigma and he is the hunter. Beautiful write!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 10:48:00 AM
    A really good poem Mandy!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you :) :) :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:11:00 AM
    i like this very much! i think the "real me" often stays hidden from others. you've said it very well.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:09:00 AM
    wow Mandy the complexity, the philosophy, they are all in there.. this is a awesome poem, one full of truth and sincerity.. a map to explore no doubt....

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:47:00 AM
    lovely write friend creative.. have a nice day!! :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Powerful write there Mandy. I liked it very much.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:43:00 AM
    nicely penned

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:23:00 AM
    I enjoyed this one, Mandy. To whom is it addressed? Great lines that keep me wanting to read more and more!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Hi, Mandy! This is a splendid write which I enjoy reading tonight. It's a great testimony of hopes and dreams. I love it! Thank you for sharing. Take care always, hugs:) LG

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:50:00 AM
    wonderful write GG,searching and searching