The Rattle of the Keyboard

The sound of the keys clicking The keyboard rattles with each strike No matter how long I rattle the keys There is nothing worth reading I can write. © 27/03/2013

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/2/2013 8:21:00 AM

Oh yeah. So aptly put.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/29/2013 9:27:00 AM

Mandy - All I can say is, keep clicking those...Hey! You just wrote one and a very funny and clever one too...must have worked...

Robert Heemstra

Date: 3/28/2013 5:00:00 PM

Tanks for the read and thanks for your comments on "Off the Bench"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2013 5:00:00 PM

Cute one..Great flow to it..Your writing is great though..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/27/2013 9:33:00 AM

I feel the same way most of the time...ha

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/27/2013 4:38:00 AM

I agree with Harry completely..you just wrote something worthy of reading here! This is a fantastic and delightful poem this morning! What an amazing piece, such a lovely poem my friend, Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/27/2013 2:55:00 AM

you wanna bet i've just read something worthy