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The Rank Scent of Bear

where a sleeping bag

lies empty near the shelter. . . 

the rank scent of bear


For the The NO Contest, Contest Poetry Contest
of Charles Henderson

animalhaiku

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:40:00 AM

awesome

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/7/2013 6:47:00 PM

Wow! you are prolific. Fine work... Congrats... Jack

Afroze Ali

Date: 5/6/2013 1:18:00 AM

congratulations Andrea!!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 3:47:00 PM

wow, just awesome

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/4/2013 9:20:00 AM

Congrats Andrea~A.O

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/3/2013 5:38:00 PM

Andrea I knew this would be a winner. Congratulations.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/3/2013 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations. I love the humor and truth you have written.

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/3/2013 11:00:00 AM

Big congrats, Andrea!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/3/2013 7:06:00 AM

I knew this gem would make it to the top spot. Congratulations and well done, Andrea. :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/3/2013 6:17:00 AM

Top spot and what a winner xx Busy time but thanks for asking Andy hope to get back into full swing soon xx

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/2/2013 10:10:00 PM

Congratulations on this #1 finish!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2013 9:32:00 PM

Andrea, love the way your poem made it... always enjoy reading your work... :-)...PD

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/2/2013 6:57:00 PM

this is awesome.I just entered in the typewriter contest.first time to just pick a subject and write only about it.my mind just went there.it was nice cause i needed a break from here for a minute.this was a no contest for first place.good job.take care

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/2/2013 3:41:00 PM

Congrats Andrea This story goes far beyond the words. SuZ

Red Omara

Date: 5/2/2013 3:32:00 PM

Not a pretty picture. But a good and popular win. Congratulations.- Red

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/2/2013 3:19:00 PM

Congratulations Petal, it's about time you won something lol. I told you, 'If you go down to the woods today you're in for a nice suprise', and you got one

Judy Konos

Date: 5/2/2013 2:56:00 PM

Excellent ....you're a 10 with me but could only click on the 7 Congratulations....

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/2/2013 2:43:00 PM

Excellent!!........and we know Charles is a good judge of haiku !!!! Congrats on your well deserved top place once again!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/2/2013 1:03:00 PM

Oh my Andrea..Its' barely worth' contemplating on the fate of the former sleeper, but i am contemplating the upward trajectory of this little piece..' Joe..)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2013 1:42:00 AM

I can sense both the sleeping bag & bear's scent in your great haiku poem my dearest friend, Andrea! I love it! Good luck and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/30/2013 7:09:00 PM

If you go down to the woods today, Oh, we been there already aint we lol, This has left me speechless Petal, don't be cruel, I love bears lol. Left you a note on my friends poem. Take care, Richard

Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 7:11:00 PM

No I have not, its on hurricane, I think lol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/30/2013 4:19:00 PM

Oh yes, I can just imagine that camper running for their life. Haha. Loved it!

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/30/2013 11:33:00 AM

Totally devoid of humanity.:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/30/2013 10:45:00 AM

Oh Dear, this is real, does the imagination after work this out,, well certainly gives one heaps to think about.....

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/30/2013 10:38:00 AM

The most like beef...hmmm...well, elk and deer have a very similar texture, but only taste like beef if you do them in a pot roast or stew...or chili...then you can't tell the difference.

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