The Rain By Anna Lo P

"As I watch the blue skies
 Suddenly turned into gray
 Darkness easily surrounds 
 Their clouds, covered in haze.

 The rain will fall again, I say
 A nature's moment I dismay
 Raindrops will soon touch the ground
 The sad feeling, again I'll be hound.

 Splattering rain, the sound that haunts
 Sweet and sad memories of the man
 Taunting me to remember once again
 The love once lost, never be back again

 Every drop of rain that falls, I pain
 Each drop it falls, my heart is in vain
 "Try to listen" to the rain, he once said
 'Tis like a last goodbye, could not hear I said. 

 The sound of the crying heart, I still hear
 The sound of a weeping soul, I can hear
 The silent tears that they weep,
 The silent scream that echos so deep.

 Listen to every drop of rain
 To it's agony, vain, pain, 
 Listen to the rain as it falls, maybe
 There is your love, every drop after all...xoxo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/18/2012 6:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your expressive, descriptive and creative work..It could also be listed as verse..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2012 10:42:00 AM
http://youtu.be/bt126fPmPfs Hello Ms. Sara, I have this song played over and over again,as my heart weeps & my soul laments!..and I made this one..purely truly deeply from that dying heart. (do you get the scenerio? sa sad isnt it? .. Anyways, thanks for reading this piece.. I havent done one yet since The Final Blow..but will soon, it may take some time I guess. Shalom to us Poets..Anna
Date: 10/15/2012 7:18:00 PM
Very nice read.
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Date: 10/16/2012 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Mr. Matthew..I think everything there has been said..for now.. until then, Love will find Me!... A blessed day to you and thanks for the comment. :)
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