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The Promise

A young girl, Barely seven, Gets on the school bus With bruises covering her arms And tears in her eyes. A young girl, Almost nine, Sits in the corner of her room And cries, As her daddy shoots And her mommy dies. A teenage girl. Of about fifteen, Cries When the doctor Says those dreadful words. A young woman, Of twenty two, Watches as her Seven year old daughter Gets on the bus for school. They say I love you and smile, As she promises to never hurt her child.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/23/2011 8:26:00 AM
Well written and thought provoking. You have an admirable presentation here.
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:56:00 AM
Kaci, you have broken the cycle. I did this with my mother and now have a 26 year old daughter who I love so much and she loves me. My son is 28 and I have a good husband too. My mother was a very bitter woman, we have contact but its only that. This is beautiful, well done:)))
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