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The Power

The Power Love,,,,,,the ,,,,,power,,,,,Of,,,,Something, It’s,,,,,,,opposition,,,,,,,is,,,,,,Nothing,!,,had,,,,, humanity,,,,,,,,,,,,rather ,,,,,be,,,,,,,,nothing,,,,zit,,,,nada,,,,,? The,,,,,,,Power,,,,,,,had,,,,,,,to ,,,,,start,,,,,,,somewhere,,,,, rather,,,,,,,we,,,,,it,,,,, not ,,,,,,started,,,,, will,,,,,we,,,,,,cut,,,,,,off,,,,,our noses,,,,,, to,,,,,spite,,,,our ,,,,faces,,,? Will,,,humanity,,,cut,,,off,,,it’s,,,,own,,,,nose,, the,,,,, thing,,,,,love,,,,,,created,,,,to,,,,,spite,, God,,,,,our,,,,,,face,,,,,? Some,,,where,,,,,before,,,,time,,,,,began,,,,faith,,,,,God,,,,love,,,,, had,,,,,to,,,,,be,,,,,,interjected,,,,,for,,,,,,humanity,,,, to,,,,,,become,,,,,the,,,,,,reflected,,,,,! Can,,,,,,,,,we,,,,,,,not,,,,,,all,,,,,call,,,,,the,,,,nature,,,of,,,,it,,,all,,,, love,,,,the power,,,,God,,, Faith,,,,,,in,,,,,power,,,,,, Created,,,,,,us,,,,the,,,tower,, of,,,,,God’s,,,,power...? Or,,,,,will,,,,,the,,,,,derivative,,,,mind,,,,,intertwine,,,,,, into,,,,,,reflective,,,,,,,,,world,,,,,continue,,,,,,the whine,,,,,,,,without,,,,,the,,,,,,power,,, we,,,,continue,,,,,to,,,,sour,, by,,,the,,hour,,, in denial,,of, God’s,, Face, The, Power, by Faith!!

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:45:00 AM
    wow, this is mighty and it JOHN... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 9:16:00 AM
    This is an awesome write Moses. Power packed message conveyed so eloquently! Love it! Thanks for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments and words of encouragement. All is truly appreciated! God Bless~Mary

  1. Date: 12/16/2009 4:53:00 PM
    Wow, this is quite amazing! Just stopping by to say thank you for your kind congrats on my win in Debbie's contest! Happy holidays to you! love, shar

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 2:30:00 PM
    Moses.. u never cease to amaze me.. this is unique with a most valuable message.. enjoy your style ... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 7:58:00 AM
    Cool, this one stimulates some deep thought. I like the style.

  1. Date: 10/11/2009 2:15:00 PM
    I agree with all of the other commenters phenomenal piece!

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 11:38:00 PM
    Wonderful WOW this is awesome I love how much work you ahve put into this one its visually stunning wonderful !!! kind regards Jayne and again ty for your comments :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 1:41:00 AM
    very attractive and filled with meaning and wise wisdom, keep up the good work ABe

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 1:42:00 AM
    Wow inventive a must for my favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 12:58:00 AM
    Wow, powerful in both words and form!! Interesting concept, I like it! A belated welcome to Poetry soup, and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Peace Always Fathima

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 11:00:00 AM
    Outstanding presentation, my friend! Original...unique! Great, a pleasure to read! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 3:22:00 AM
    this reminds me of one of those Rorschach pictures where someone tells you what they think they see when they look at an ink blot. I see a man's face who's smiling, but I have to use a lot of imagination to place the eyes and nose, or maybe that's cause he cut off his own nose;) I can see you're a fan of the !! marks. I tend to stray away from them, they communicate a forcefulness that I found a lot of people aren't prepared for. ? signs are great though, as we all have lots of questions...

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 10:16:00 PM
    You have mail.

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 10:38:00 PM
    you have quite the collection as well friend, and no I am from denver..."GO BRONCOS".. Awesome style, beautiful and inspirational words make you one of many great poets on this site......:JP)

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 3:38:00 PM
    Amazing form in this highly stylized write, Moses. Indeed we do seem to be biting the noses off of our own faces when we ignore the power of faith. By denying God, we deny our own potential. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 2:41:00 PM
    interestin form you have here. i like it