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The Point of Desperation

The point of desperation Is a point of no return A point where your heart's melting like the candles that you burn A point where you are fighting Just to know that you're okay A point where you'll do anything No matter what you say A point where you will turn on the closest one's you know The point where you are holding on and never letting go A point of painful longing for the thing that you most seek You sometimes point your finger at the innocent or weak The point of desperation is a point of no return A point where your heart's melting Like the candles that you burn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 5:48:00 PM
This reads a little bit like a kyrielle. VEry nice. Congratulations on your win! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:07:00 AM
Congrats Bridget on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:01:00 PM
congratulations Bridget on your win in the contest.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:15:00 PM
Hi Bridget - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:44:00 AM
Congrats Bridget on your big win in Paula's contest with this excellent entry.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Bridget
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congrats, Bridget on your well deserved win. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Bridget in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:16:00 AM
Hi Bridget..Congratulations on you fantastic 2nd Place win in Paula's "Point' Contest! I really enjoyed it! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:37:00 PM
desperation is very dominant, no overpowering that, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:53:00 AM
A lovely flow to this poem, very enjoyable.
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