The Plane With Prawns

At my wake from the bed of life
And a walk to the sea shore
I saw no bend, no end
All was like a plane with grains of gain
I planned, played and prayed thru’ the plane
Along the path I saw a palm tree
I placed my hands at it and rested my back 
Tho' with my heart panting
Could i see anyone chanting or ranting? 
No! I mean not even psalms  
As I leave with the palm leaves in my palms
I met the potter, he gave me two pots
And showed me a hut 
where I slept unhurt 
I ate and drank from the pots as I make sports 
I picked some prawns on my path 
What a great catch with no match?
Praising and prancing, I proceeded
On my plight in the plane
The prime plight that marked my plea;
A pail was planted in the plane
I planned and played into the pail 
Just that i failed to pray
Even when there was no hail
There I hurt my legs, lost my prawns and broke my pots
But i didn't turn a prey
The potter shun his rays
Alas! A pail, that pains in the plane with prawns.
1Cor.10:12, 
2Cor.9:10- 15.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/2/2012 7:05:00 AM
Creative, Fisayo. Thanks for visiting my page. You got your prayer!! Love, Toquyen
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Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 6/29/2012 2:11:00 PM
You welcome and thanks for your comment.
Date: 6/2/2012 5:53:00 AM
Oh wow!!! An excellent write here...my morning is starting off great now..I really love the flow and the choice of words you use to keep it flowing..I wanted more..very creative how you set the poem up...enjoyed INK-U-SCRIPT
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Fisayo Aderounmu
Date: 6/29/2012 2:12:00 PM
Pace thanks always for your kind comments.
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