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The Orange Tree

The concrete jungle shines and gleams All around shiny glass beams And amid this dusty shimmering sea Stands a lone orange tree The fragrant flowers silently blooms Seeking the warmth from the sun that looms The birds have left and stopped their calls It is quiet, not a sound falls The weary traveller sits beneath Seeking the cool underneath Touching the smooth, fragile bark Dreaming of some sparrow or maybe a lark Perhaps he dreams of a wasted love Escaped like a frightened dove Or some happy memory That from him has become free This gentle haven amid the fire A place to commune and retire And all around lovers came this vision to see And feel the enchantment under the orange tree 25/11/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/19/2012 9:02:00 AM
Tahera, reading this makes me want to be beside the lone Orange Tree. Beautiful visions of tranquillity abound in your words. A most beautiful write :)
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:07:00 PM
great imagery. gosh, this one could be entered into the tree contest (I am trying to think if that one needed to use a specific form but you could make this into that form!) Glad I read it today.
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:09:00 AM
Thank you for this beautiful and well done poem,Tahera. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/2/2012 5:20:00 AM
Very nice work Mam. good imagination. loved reading it! :)
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:05:00 AM
Very peaceful setting Tahera, beautiful job. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/31/2011 10:45:00 PM
Nice write here Tahera.Wish you a Very very Happy New Year.
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Date: 11/28/2011 7:31:00 AM
Thanks sister for sharing such a ncie poem. I realy enjoyed it. The flow and use of words is realy amazing. Allah may bless u
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:17:00 AM
what a nice picture of this orange tree. Each line well worded with sweet rhyme. Nice work,Tahera. Have a nice day
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Date: 11/25/2011 9:23:00 AM
We all need such a place. Mine is usually at the barbeque.
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Date: 11/25/2011 8:54:00 AM
* "Always A Joy Whenever Finding Your Gifted & Lovely Beauties Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Tahera * Sooo Magnificent & Enchanting This Wonderful Picturesque Painting * Almost Fairytalistic Its Voice & Colours * A Mirrored Glimpse Into Your Own Priceless & Tender Beauty * T'would Be Your Lovely Self 8 Believe That * Countless Would Come to Gaze Upon Within Joy * Very Beautiful * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/25/2011 7:59:00 AM
One of the best poem I have read in a long time... simply beautiful on every level of Poetry...luv Michael
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