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the orange sky above

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the orange sky above


I woke up this morning and it was as
Beautiful as can be- a sunlit orange sky
Staring down at me.

The sky was all orange with patches
Of light and dark blue
I felt like I was in a pumpkin patch
MY ! What a glorious view.

The breeze started moving the clouds ever so fast
OH ! How I wished this morning would last.
As the morning wore on it turned a baby light blue
To start the day fresh and new.

As the sun started rising to change the day
The birds in the air were beginning to play
A sight like this couldn’t get much better
Where heaven and earth were joining together.

© L . RAMS

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:22:00 AM
    you woke to a beautiful picture this morning. if only the light would stay.

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    Date: 12/12/2012 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much ann for your lovely comment