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The Ocean

As the waves of the ocean crash, Little creatures skitter-skatter pitter-patter past by the shore. As they turned around, more waves crashed, And they pitter-pattered skitter-skattered past by no more. Taken back, back... to the depth of the ocean floor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/28/2013 12:15:00 PM
nice to read you again, tim... love the rhythmic flow and the use of onomatopeia... happy new year greetings and huggs
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:30:00 PM
What a nice poem...love the skitter-skatter part. BG
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Date: 12/27/2013 11:19:00 AM
- Oh .... touching, in a few words Tim - All the best for the new year 2014! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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