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The Ocean

As the waves of the ocean crash,
Little creatures skitter-skatter pitter-patter past
by the shore.

As they turned around, more waves crashed,
And they pitter-pattered skitter-skattered past
by no more.
Taken back, back...
to the depth of the ocean floor.

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  1. Date: 12/28/2013 12:15:00 PM
    nice to read you again, tim... love the rhythmic flow and the use of onomatopeia... happy new year greetings and huggs

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 5:30:00 PM
    What a nice the skitter-skatter part. BG

  1. Date: 12/27/2013 11:19:00 AM
    - Oh .... touching, in a few words Tim - All the best for the new year 2014! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)