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The night

The nights are getting cold
The stars are shining bright
Looking down, then up to 
Wondering where I go from this 

The darkness is all around me
But I search for the light
The world keeps spinning 
around now
Feeling so dizzy, wanting to be 
held tight.

I dream an unknown face
Will I ever see that sight
Always feeling so alone
Wondering if it will ever be all 

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:19:00 AM
    A very well written poem, but it's a bit sad Andrea. - I wish you a pleasant and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:31:00 PM
    ANDREA,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*