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The New Birth

In the dark ages, The world lay bare With no care In the inhabitants lives. As time flies So knowledge grows From height To height till it springs Something tangible. Then a blessing and a Curse was conceived Which bcame compatible With the society, A new society. The new birth brought Means of destruction Of lives And the creation Of medium of easier Movements like flying In the air,moving From one planet To another planet With measures costlier. An instrument of death And life like two-edged Sword,out of its sheath. Your bearers are judged As scientists with intentions. What intentions? The savior of mankind? Written by: Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 8:53:00 PM
Bob, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:43:00 PM
hello I Bob, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:10:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Bob
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:43:00 PM
Hi Ifeanyi Bob, thanks much for entering my contest with this lovely thoughtful poem about how science could be seen as a new birth. However the contest rules require the personification form. Also, the form you chose doesn't match this form either. I would do one more edit, it is still a wonderful poem regardless of the contest, I enjoyed reading it.
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