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The Music of Your Kiss

I was floundering on an empty sea. A granite heart was mine to bear. When you came along and set me free. I soaked up all your loving care. My turtledove,you're everywhere! You gave me love right from the start. Needing your touch just fills me up. Let me carry your smile in my heart. Keep drinking from your loving cup. You're cozy as a new born pup! When day is done and night time falls hold me close and don't let go. Our passion rises behind these walls. The music of your kiss will flow into my soul,this much I know! written October 11th,2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/20/2012 6:46:00 AM
You know you'd have a fine little sonnet here if you give us 2 more lines, maybe bump the last 2 down & add 2 more to stanza 3? Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2012 2:26:00 PM
Very romantic work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2012 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations Debs, a super write xx
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Date: 11/7/2012 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful Write Deb. Warm congrats for the win.
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Date: 11/6/2012 10:25:00 PM
congrats on your 5th place win Deb, great job
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Date: 10/11/2012 4:58:00 AM
So gorgeous and romantic Deb, I am in love ..... in your poem :) Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/11/2012 4:52:00 AM
wow!! so romantic...awesome write friend Deb..(^_^)
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Date: 10/11/2012 4:09:00 AM
Good poem here. Enjoyed the read
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Date: 10/11/2012 3:34:00 AM
Very good romantic passionate poem here Deb!Love the line-- cozy as a new born pup.Best wishes to you.
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