The Music of My Soul

The Music of My Soul

And someone across the land fell asleep
Wondering for the flashback which slithered around the cerebrums and beats
Turbulences perched, paralyzing every moments in hue
But the tremor grew the dreams, the hopes when I'm with you

A tale behind the classic beauty of Sakura 
The story which hid the bliss upon the million scenes called love
Recalled by the moment is a gift
Even the journey of days and nights had to pass.... Revealing the mist....

You are the tune of a past
Every strings which had played, remind me of a grasp
Every chants of a song, resembled the moments of us two 
Every tears which had dropped, drew the embrace of you

Every stupid chapter
Every comfort zone
Every felicity which crafted
Released me from the ice-block

For you are the tones of my bliss
For you are the music of my soul
The most beautiful song that ever born 
Fulfill every cavity of my empty soul ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/21/2013 3:38:00 PM
Oh my my most excellent makes me want to write Free Verse again though so few read it and fewer seem to understand it. a 7 and to my fav's Light & Love little one
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/21/2013 6:44:00 PM
men! :P
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/21/2013 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, this is based on my friend's experience when she went for student exchange in Japan, she met a guy and fell in love, this guy make a promised that one day he would come to visit her in her country when she back home, but now it is just a story, he never come :)
Date: 12/26/2012 5:32:00 AM
Thank you for a lovely and well written poem Yanny. - Bless you! - / / Anne-Lise :)
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