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The Mourning After

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The Mourning After

Sunday night Apr. 8, 2001:
the night I slept in relative peace
foolishly, naively believing and
falsely assuming that all was well…

But then the morning after:
though not the worst morning after
still the numbing, paralyzing morning after
the morning his voice seemed far away
as if it were an eerie, drug induced dream
the morning he regretted to inform...

(For a precious few weeks
one hibernates, wrapped up safely
in that protective cocoon
of sweet denial and disbelief)

No, the worst morning after came:
after all had been said and done
after basking in the glow of sympathy 
after the admiration of my iron will
after all returned to daily routines
after I found myself alone again…

Oh no, the worst morning after:
was the morning I startled awake
to find that monster standing there
that monster who pointed at me
and told me the bitter, brutal truth
the awful and merciful truth of God
the truth that you are really gone
and are never, ever coming back…

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  1. Date: 6/17/2014 10:57:00 AM
    Such an echoing piece that touched me greatly. Congrats on the win! I can see why it's your favorite... A haunting piece...

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 8:48:00 PM
    Tim, your poem rocked me, so heavy and deep. This is a top win tied to tons of pain!

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 6:52:00 PM
    Yes it does take a while to truly comprehend the forever of it. a great poem. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 2:13:00 AM
    Thanks for sharing your favorite poem, congrats on the well deserved win, Tim

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 12:10:00 AM
    nice win Tim. Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/14/2014 10:54:00 PM
    TIM. Congratulations with your own "Favorite Poem, entered in Carol's XOOL contest... Yeah, we all Win... What a sweet Deal... XOX~ LINDA

  1. Date: 4/14/2014 7:36:00 PM
    Tim, these words carry such a weight of grief that I understand so well. I still have days when I feel this...just want someone to say his name without prompting. You expressed the intensity so well.

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 4/14/2014 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No words can express my appreciation for your comment my dear friend and of course, I know you indentify...
  1. Date: 2/26/2014 6:31:00 AM
    such a heart wrenching poem, I'm so sorry for your loss - your son, I presume? I know I said before that I was stunned it didn't get onto the winners' list back then, but it has done now, and rightly so...this would've made a wonderful entry for my 'love and loss' contest, tim, why on earth didn't you enter it?

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 2/26/2014 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks my friend..I must have missed that contest
  1. Date: 2/26/2014 12:10:00 AM
    having lost a son also, I know the feeling. The ups ad downs. It does get better. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 10:05:00 PM
    As a veteran who could have been he...with a wife that could have been she... I am moved beyond words. Thank you for sharing with us. Bless his memory. Christopher

    Britt Avatar Christopher Thor Britt
    Date: 2/25/2014 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My comments came from my point of view that the author's voice was that of a wife left behind. But, I see after reading again that it could be anyone really who lost someone close to them.
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 7:46:00 PM
    I wish for you to make sweet memories cher .. please? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 2/25/2014 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks cher...I am to the point where most of the memories are sweet now and I know that eventually they all will be...
  1. Date: 2/25/2014 4:49:00 AM
    Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,tim

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 4:16:00 AM
    Tim, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 3:01:00 AM
    - Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Tim. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 1:33:00 PM
    Tim, this is very sad, and moved my heart for you... Thank you for sharing your heart and tears with us.. Congratulations.... LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 6:12:00 PM
    A very sad and heartbreaking story, Tim. I know we can all relate to this in some way. You expressed your feelings so well here. Great work! I really like the title, a clever play on words!...Thank you for the wonderful comments. I appreciate it very much! Happy Holidays to you, my friend!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Tim - You speak personally and universally for all of us. In strange juxtaposition life goes on. (sometimes I hate those words) lvoe you, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 6:26:00 AM
    did this not get onto the winners' list? I'm surprised, it really should have...your writing has quite a distinctive style, and is getting stronger by the day, I feel...thanks for your wonderful comment, it made me laugh! :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Hi Tim...this is a heartbreaking poem ...Touched the soft spot of my heart and soul.I was busy too be here on ps but im glad im back to such amazing poems.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Tim, my heart bleeds at this write..yes.....bleeds. What you must have endured...Out of pain, beauty is born......Lovely poem. One day....there is a resurrection more, Tim.......HUGS