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The Morning Rush

Blanketed in darkness, despite the morning skies
A dull flicker of memory rears behind tired eyes
Images seem blurry, pathetic and astray
But slowly gain momentum, then unite clear as day

A rush of sour emotion, the solitude infects
The thought of you so out of reach quakes beneath my chest
And for one selfish moment I let sadness kidnap me
I cry for all we never had and what will never be

Surrender to my craving, let a wave of aching in
Let my heart lie broken, let desolation sting
I cry until the tears run dry, my body breaks the fever
And try to face another day while you're lost in the ether

Copyright © Jodie Williams

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:29:00 AM
    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Jodie. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:55:00 AM
    A very sad, moving, and well written poem have shared. Thank you.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 4:57:00 PM
    very good write wishes

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 2:09:00 PM
    Really felt the emotion in this, very good word choice Keep up the good work! Rory