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The moon pours white wine

At a table in a garden, on a soft, sweet, summer's night
Two friends are sitting talking by the moon's reflected light.
On the table in the garden there are glasses but no drink
And the friends are sitting talking, but they often stop to think.
The topics that they cover seem to range so far and wide
And the glasses sit there empty, since they left the drink inside.
The night is getting cooler but the friends stay close and warm,
The moon just looks down calmly, she has magic to perform.
As he leans across to kiss her, and she kisses him as well,
The friendship starts to blossom into something more to tell.
The tension in the garden needs assistance to decline
So the silver crescent of the moon leans down to pour white wine.

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  1. Date: 12/29/2009 4:46:00 PM
    yes congrats, nicely penned!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 6:34:00 AM
    Jeff, congrats!! good luck...Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 12:21:00 PM
    Jeff, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 6:46:00 PM
    Just dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 2:26:00 PM
    Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Jeff.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 8:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 11:40:00 AM
    Very nice!!! So romantic! Congratulations on getting featured.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 11:37:00 AM
    Good job, Jeff! Congratulations on being featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 5:01:00 AM
    Congratulations, Jeff, on having your well-written and romantic poem featured today. It is lovely. I like the "couplet" rhyme scheme. It makes the poem seem simple and cheery, like first kisses. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 11:46:00 PM
    Jeff, congrats on your feature this week...Raul

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Creative use of rhyme and imagery for an uplifting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 7:24:00 AM
    This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great jeff! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 4:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jeff. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 1:34:00 AM
    Still one of the best poems I have read, I think you performed the magic here Jeff

  1. Date: 4/23/2009 7:39:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 2:53:00 PM
    Jeff, post some more. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 6:46:00 AM
    This is a great picture, Jeff, romantic, sensitive, a fine idea and form. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 10:47:00 AM
    Congrats on your feature this week...Raul

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 9:55:00 AM
    I like the image of the moon pouring white wine down on them. Congratulations on having this featured