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The Miser and the Model

The miser and the model are a couple, you might say, yet they don't speak to one another, she treats him like a brother, how to add a little romance and excitement to their day? He forgoes his prime obsession and decides on a surprise for his delectable companion with such sadness in her eyes. He promises forever, no more secrets, no more lies. As a miser he hoards money, as a model she craves size, so he gives up on his stinginess, forks out three thousand dollars to provide her with 'an extra lift,' she gives her man a hug and kiss 'cos she is thrilled to bits!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/13/2012 6:54:00 PM
Can I get in line? Nobody ever gave me anything like that. You are sweet enough to make a girl lucky when you bring one to life in a poem.
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Date: 7/28/2012 7:32:00 PM
Have you been reading gossip mags again ,,,,, I very much liked this write,,,,, blessings of the day Keith ;}
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Date: 7/27/2012 8:31:00 AM
This was a very fun poem from you. Just picturing how a miser ever ended up with a model is quite a feat!!! But stranger things have happened. My hubbie and I are like sun vs. the moon!!
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Date: 7/17/2012 8:04:00 AM
Looking good. Right?
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Date: 7/13/2012 12:38:00 PM
laughing out loud, keith...your words come alive in heaps of humor..perfect quill!..:) hugggs!
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Date: 7/13/2012 9:43:00 AM
Ha, ha, this is a wondrously compassionate write my friend! I really enjoyed this elaborate piece of art Kieth! The miser was so kind to his love, they would make a great pair if they can see what just happened! Brilliant write! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:42:00 AM
Just the lift I needed..... the poem I mean, nice words man ;-) Read
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Date: 7/13/2012 7:05:00 AM
Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Keith. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 10:42:00 PM
great pen Keith I so love what you pen!
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