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The Message In the Balloon

I caught myself this blue balloon Flying adrift and among trees Laughing I untied it from its string And ran in happiness at top speed The balloon unknowingly deflated And hung limp from my fingers Sadly I touched its shiny surface Feeling a lump in its heart As my fingers explored its very life A tiny paper note it unveiled And on it were the words of a little child Asking her daddy to come back As I sat on my bed at night And looked out to the starry sky My eyes closed and a prayer went up For daddy to come to his waiting child For daddy to come to his waiting child 20/07/2011 By Tahera Mannan For Francine’s ‘Happiness is a balloon’ contest

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Date: 7/21/2011 5:04:00 AM
tahera, this piece pinches my heart with a sense of hope and love.. i like your repetitive lines in the end... sensational write, hon! :) winning wishes with huggs, nette
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:37:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and amazing piece Tahera. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2011 5:02:00 AM
Powerfully done, Tahera.
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Date: 7/20/2011 12:55:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* “I Always Love Writes of Love & Compassion = Mix Faith, Creativity, Imagination, Purity & Passion Etc. &, One Can Only Love The Poet ot Poetess Whoms Heart Was Thus Poured *^_^* My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Tahera == Love The Metaphor & Tis Very Soft, Gentle, Loving & Beautiful *^_^* A Red Ruby Fave.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *
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