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The Merchant's Gift

THE MERCHANT’S GIFT It was just a lucky break-in Christmas Eve rich old Casey drunk Not a soul on the floor The late rush was over Casey’d turned off the lights but Forgot to lock the door The old safe cracked so easy – Mostly twenties tens fifties – Robin left the change hurried out He pulled the bills counted – One thousand twenty bucks – God! He wanted to shout Their dented pot hung sparse Maria and Joe were so hungry, Their children at home hungry cold Robin was hungry too He fished the bag of bills, Took twenty from the hold Sad the couple’s jingling When most were warm at home that night But Robin had great news He smiled sauntered up flung his loot “Hah! This thousand for your empty pot From Robin Santa Cruz.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/19/2013 1:45:00 PM
Totally well done, Daver! Your poetry feel like the surprises in an Advent calendar...they can all be different, though each is deliciously special. I've always loved poems that can reel in a fun and good tale...Keep well..Love, Mikki
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Date: 12/16/2013 3:42:00 PM
Hey there dear Daver, enjoyed the 'give and take' in this write..I wish you good cheer this time of year; Joe..'
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Date: 12/16/2013 3:10:00 PM
oh, yes, I remember it now from PFT. a GREAT one for the season, my friend.
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Date: 12/16/2013 3:09:00 PM
Loved your recent fun comments to me. Let me see what you have posted now!
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Date: 12/15/2013 1:35:00 PM
- It was not nice ..... although I like the idea of Robin (H) - The rich should share with the poor, voluntarily ..... throughout the year. - A poem that I enjoyed reading Daver, well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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