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The Master's Plan

The air that I breathe, Your mastery Where the water ends, land begins Flowers engulfed by the dew What a breathtaking view The birds in full flight All in Your plan Arranged With love God

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Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/28/2010 7:31:00 AM

Only if you let me put this in my favs. I love this one girl

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/28/2010 12:08:00 AM

You did it with this one Wilma. You have subliminal message with end words. Mastery begins, dew view, flight plan arranged, love, God.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 8:44:00 AM

A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Wilma. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Thank you for all your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 6:01:00 PM

Great way to arrange your nonet, my friend! I enjoyed this. LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 9/26/2010 7:47:00 AM

This is especially good, Wilma. "Where the water ends land begins." Great set-up. Dave

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/26/2010 5:43:00 AM

Great Plan of God written form the fingers of one of his best... I truly love this write my dear....Love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2010 4:31:00 PM

I enjoyed the master's plan of HIM, Wilma

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/25/2010 3:01:00 PM

very nice write enjoyed have a great weekend faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2010 1:59:00 PM

Warm and inviting write that expresses so much of what I experience everyday...Enjoyed this work very much..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/25/2010 12:10:00 PM

absolutely stunning, love it

James Fraser

Date: 9/25/2010 11:45:00 AM

Your love for nature and your faith oozes from your words Wilma, lovely Nonet > hope your having a great weekend girl >> James ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/25/2010 11:42:00 AM

A strong write that reflects both your faith and your admiration for nature's gifts. Beautiful Nonet, Wilma. Love, Carolyn