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The Maiden and the Knight

Once upon a time in a magical land where unicorns bathed in the waterfalls There were many dragons that roamed the sky's, terrorizing the villagers King Edwards had build a castle for everyone to live safe within it's walls The rumors of the dragons attracted many men, skilled slayers and archers The King being quite youthful was courting Hydra, a nobleman's daughter Her beauty was known well throughout the kingdom as to be the fairest However suspicion that she had fallen in love with the brave knight Drakkar The King devised a plan to get rid of this Knight and reclaim Hydra's interest Ordering a midnight attack at the catacombs as the dragons were sleeping His fearless and worthy men rode into...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2010 5:32:00 PM

you to Mitch how could you. there was no warning that you where going to leave us hanging. now i want to know the end of this one, a dragon freak am i, can't wait to read the rest later,..p.d.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/21/2010 12:54:00 PM

I could see this as a piece of narration for serious animation, not the slop that passes for it today on t.v., but something hand drawn like old Disney or the Fleischer Brothers a la Gulliver Travels 1939 or their superb Superman cartoons. It strongly reminds me of that. I like this. It should be a keeper for you. Regards, Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2010 12:42:00 PM

great storytelling, Mitch and I wish you luck in the contest. LUv, andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/19/2010 10:50:00 PM

I enjoyed your story and don't want to miss the next installment. Thanks for your kind comments. Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/19/2010 2:59:00 PM

An excellent story, Mitch...can't wait to read the rest of it...this has the makings of a story book for kids...I wish you good luck in the contest with this gen...Thanks for your kind comments on my poem....Peace, Audrey

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/19/2010 2:51:00 PM

I love the title..Much enjoyed poem..a tapestry of fine verses..awesome..Charma

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/19/2010 9:51:00 AM

very nice write good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2010 6:03:00 AM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Got my attention and drew me in and left me hanging...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work....Oh, after the contest finish this one with a sequel...Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/19/2010 5:50:00 AM

enjoyed!! goood one! hope you had a good weekend I enjoyed mine!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/19/2010 5:38:00 AM

Really enjoy the fantasy setting in your "leave them hanging" write, Mitch, complete with dragons, knights and unicorns. When writing such fiction, it is always difficult for me to come up with good names, but you selected well there too. (Reminds me of some of James Frasers' work and that's a big compliment.) Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn