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The Love of "fall"

F alling in love with Winter; she’s ice cold dressed in snow white lace A ll the while dating Summer, who’s still sizzling hot L ove affairs bruised with revengeful reds, oppressed oranges, and yelling yellows L eaving Summer with a promise to one day rekindle their love

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/31/2012 11:21:00 PM

Abe, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD

Anthony Scandrick Ii

Date: 7/31/2012 7:29:00 PM

Nice poem....great explanation for every letter in the topic:)

Daver Austin

Date: 7/31/2012 9:42:00 AM

Looking forward, wistfully. Love this one, Abe. Congrats on the selection. daver

Alfreda Williamson

Date: 7/31/2012 9:23:00 AM

Loved it

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 5:15:00 PM

A short, but very sweetly descriptive acrostic. Nicely done.

James Fraser

Date: 5/25/2010 11:52:00 AM

Abe, i have to admit this is such a delight to read. It's certainly my favourite. Many congratulations on your win in Jared's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2010 7:20:00 PM

Congrats Abe on your HM in the Acrostic contest with a great write... luv the flow.. Summer best line for me ..sizzling hot... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Date: 5/20/2010 9:07:00 PM

What a creative use of the acrostic form to give us a view of the seasons. Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Joe Flach

Date: 5/20/2010 5:36:00 PM

Very creative Abe. Nice imagery. Telling Fall's story from both ends - very creative. Joe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 2:18:00 PM

Hey, very nice. YOu went for the personification same as I did in this contest. Luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2010 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest Abe. Love,Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2009 3:15:00 AM

Love this one quite a write. I love all the emotion that Fall has expressed here. Keep the colorful and expressive pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 8:25:00 AM

This is such a lovely Acrostic, Abe! Your imagery is wonderful and the sentiment is beautiful! Love, Robin

Elaine George

Date: 10/15/2009 7:24:00 AM

Abe! This is a magnificent Acrosctic personification that is going straight to my favorite list. Love, Lainie

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 10/13/2009 7:44:00 AM

wow that is awsome!!! wow speechless!!!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/13/2009 5:49:00 AM

Nice lines, Abe, especially line one. Thanks for your comments. Gert

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/12/2009 11:14:00 PM

Clever acrostic, Summer is always hot. Nice work...Raul

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 6:17:00 PM

Quite witty, and unique, this imagery as an affair.Smile, Sincerely, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2009 2:49:00 PM

A bit of the romance twist to the changing seasons!! Loved this! :) ~ Charming poem, Abe!!

James Fraser

Date: 10/12/2009 2:33:00 PM

Beautiful Acrostic Abe, lovely images in your lovely words >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2009 2:13:00 PM

Magnificent write, Abe, filled with color and emotion! When is your book coming out? Please post a blog when it does. Love you, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2009 2:12:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this awesome Acrostic with us today Abe. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/12/2009 1:18:00 PM

so wonderfully presented and i love the last verse..Leaving Summer with a promise to one day rekindle their love..What a beauty Abe-to my favs..-Charma

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 10/12/2009 1:15:00 PM

NICE