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The Loss

A flower rests upon the sand. Petals blowing in the gentle wind, Orange and yellow they glow, In setting suns light So... bright. Seagulls bark from the sky, While waves quietly lap at the shore. Leaves blow off the trees, Swirling... to the ground Landing by feet. In the sand Four marks stand with Two leading away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/22/2010 8:28:00 AM
That ending line gave a very interesting color to the whole poem. Nice images! andrea
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