Get Your Premium Membership

The Long Wintered Heart

The seasons of the heart stop turning When the last coal of hope stops burning... The long wintered heart doth endow Slumber, waiting for spring to come Like the field that awaits the plow Or, a seed that waits to become. But no plow can break that frozen ground Nor, can precious seeds of love be found... It's a land where hope has vanished That place called the long wintered heart Where spring is forever banished And, where winter never departs. A dying land refusing to die Frozen in pain beneath ashen skies... A barren land with no cities That's crowned a clown for it's king A clown robed in blue self pity Like, a blue bird that cannot sing. No birds sing, no kingdom for the king No summer's growth, no hope for a queen... Yes, I know of this wintered place In that wasteland there rules a clown Who stole my name, and wears my face With my smile painted upside down. Timothy I. Brumley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/11/2014 7:44:00 AM
Timothy, that's what fascinated me, your experimentation in meter. I've re-read this poem four times, picking up on your variations. Meter and rhyme are where I derive my greatest enjoyment I will get excited and write to fast and post, when I should let the poem "rest", an hour or day. I spent 12 years taking care of my mom. She passed away last year. Until one becomes a caregiver, they'll never understand the dedication & stamina involved. My heartfelt thoughts go with you YF Gene Bourne.
Login to Reply
Brumley Avatar
Timothy Brumley
Date: 4/11/2014 7:59:00 AM
I would sometimes do the same thing Gene, its best to write your poems and save them in a draft first and then go back several times before posting. The mark of a good poet is someone who creates different rhyme schemes with unique structuring and ideas which flow with ease and perfection. Most of my best poems just came to me in a moment of inspiration but many I struggled with so there's no set pattern to greatness I'm afraid. The best thing is to write what you know best.
Date: 4/11/2014 4:12:00 AM
I was attracted to this poem by its title. When the poem pulled up, I was taken by its construction. I soon discovered the rewards after reading this beautiful poem. As a new member I noticed the comments lamenting your absence of late. After reading only three of your poems, I fully understand why. Your friend, Gene Bourne.
Login to Reply
Brumley Avatar
Timothy Brumley
Date: 4/11/2014 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Gene, I was experimenting with the rhyme scheme here with the idea of bringing two different trains of thought together both represented by two different rhyme schemes and arriving at the same conclusions with a twist ending. I like to mix things up sometimes and am always looking for unique patterns of rhyme and pentameter. I have not been led to write anything new for quite sometimes now and spend a lot of time taking care of my 80 yr old mother.
Date: 4/24/2013 11:01:00 AM
There is no crueler ruler than winter. poor bluebird that cannot sing. I am new here and have enjoyed reading your work. Hope you find your way back here.... It seems you are missed. Light to your heart, SuZ
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2011 7:22:00 PM
You know Tim, you are such a gifted writer and I hate to see you not doing it any more. I stop by every so often to have a pick me up and I always enjoy reaidng your poems. I loved this one and the last verse is phenomenal for sure.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2010 10:08:00 PM
"bleak skies", now that is winter, well written Tim.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2010 9:49:00 AM
Very insightful write, Tim. No wonder you did well in Paula's contest. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 8/13/2010 1:25:00 AM
Hi Timothy :) -- very interesting way of answering the question and I enjoyed the metaphors you used here-- "wintered heart" is just so vivid for me-- congrats btw for your win!! & hmmm thanks, I think I've recovered from that stroke- tenk yu; orr denn agen, mebi noht!! aaack dees ees puruhbubbly sumtin elsss!!! --neeckaw ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/12/2010 6:23:00 PM
Nice one,, enjoying your writes hope your days going well...P.D.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/12/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations Tim on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "How Do I Answer That Question ". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 11:42:00 PM
Tim, this is such a lovely poem..with so many great phrases..the last line is a killer. Congrats. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 10:50:00 PM
Great poem and answer. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 9:31:00 PM
congratulations on your win Timothy, enjoyed this poem, so much in every word. Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Timothy on your winning poem in Paula's contest with this exquisite write and impressive piece for her contest.. enjoy anotheer special victory my friend..with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 8:38:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 12:52:00 PM
Intriguing write Timothy.. enjoyed a special creative piece from your gifted pen today.. Ireland is a lovely country and your last four lines speak volumes to the content of the poem..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2010 10:18:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Tim. Love, Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs